Woo!
The character was so funny! What he says, he voice, wow he looks, everything!
Woo!
The character was so funny! What he says, he voice, wow he looks, everything!
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Excellent animation and hilarious.
I enjoy Goth Lyfe, but...
When scepter blinks his eyebrows go with the eyes, which is... odd.
Not to mention everything is made from brush.
Dialogue's a bit slow, too.
Fantastic
The satire in this is hilarious.
The animation is excellent as well.
I also follow the statement that sprites are gay.
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Funny, perfect animation, top-notch sound.
Pure Awesome.
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~Plot~
Story was great. Ran smoothly with the last episode. The cut-off for the next episode was okay. Be sure to have some original ideas.
~Art & Design~
This part really saved the movie. Art was excellent. It looked like you spent a lot of time on the background and characters.
~Animation~
Here's where you lost points. The frame rate still looks like doing it at 12fps. You really need to work on that. Make the character interact quicker. Halfway, there was some noticeable pauses between dialogue. Lip sync was okay.
~Other~
The scene selection was a great touch. And the Character Bios were awesome! I really hope you keep those features in the next one.
~InnerChild548
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! I hope you'll be back to see the improvements for episode 4! And glad you noticed the extras and improvements since our last episode!
-Taco Buttfish.
Lock O' Lecilious
Best St. Patrick's Day Flash on Newgrounds, and I found the fishy! But something puzzles me. You're drinking, but you're only 20...
Aw, who cares, it's six more days 'till St. Patty's Day!
well the drinking age in several countries is 18
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Right from the beginning of Episode 2 I could see you were using the Dragon Ball Z theme with the old man, young kid with powers, and the monster with the rough, scratchy voice. The reason why it worked so perfectly is because you combined it with new art. Making a fun, familiar theme with intriguing new characters. Follow the rhythm of that.
What was the frame rate, 14? It seemed awfully slow. Although your art skills dazzling, your animator abilities don't look too sharp.
The voices were okay. Sound quality was poor, but I know you don't have complete control over it. I do so wish your equipment gets better.
The plot seems to be doing okay. You are ending the episodes well.
I believe that wraps it up. I hope to see exponential improvement in the next chapter. I promise I'll see it; I never stop watching a series mid-way.
~InnerChild548
Glad you enjoyed it, and yes, we were definitely inspired by the great Akira Toriyama and his series. And we take this series very seriously, so you'll see the equipment and the end result of each product get better and better with time. So, see you for Episode 3 sometime this month (March)!
-Taco Buttfish.
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