uglyslug's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Alphie intro sequence]

Excellent

That was pretty good! Looks like you put a shitload of effort into this baby.

I enjoyed it. Great job!

vezanmatics responds:

I actually didn't. It was a side project in school, and it was pretty cool, so I thought it would be worth posting.

[LL - In the Slums]

WOOHOO!

Holy Shit Man, that was full of win.

Thanks for the cameo!!!

FABULOUS FLASH!

LeafLock responds:

lol meh.

[The War - My 1st Flash...]

Terrible

Well, well, look who it is...

~Plot~
Unstable. No humor, simple, not the most interesting story in world. At least in was slightly easy to follow.

~Animation~
Was the frame rate at 12? Please adapt to ~18-30, for smoothness. I personal use 24fps. Mostly, the animation was terrible. Background was boring and unfitting. You need a load more practice with Flash before you submit anything else. Very shotty.

~Sound~
Many new animators don't realizes how important using sound is. It really adds feeling and mood to a Flash. Instead of using cheap text bubbles, use voices. It keeps the viewer focused.

~Other~
One last comment for revenge, ur flash sucks arse!

Have a great day,
~Review Request Club~

Rabjab responds:

Innerchild... I recieved your PM and Thank you...

[OLD MOBS EP3]

<Review Request Club>

~Plot~
Story was great. Ran smoothly with the last episode. The cut-off for the next episode was okay. Be sure to have some original ideas.

~Art & Design~
This part really saved the movie. Art was excellent. It looked like you spent a lot of time on the background and characters.

~Animation~
Here's where you lost points. The frame rate still looks like doing it at 12fps. You really need to work on that. Make the character interact quicker. Halfway, there was some noticeable pauses between dialogue. Lip sync was okay.

~Other~
The scene selection was a great touch. And the Character Bios were awesome! I really hope you keep those features in the next one.

~InnerChild548

tacobuttfish responds:

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! I hope you'll be back to see the improvements for episode 4! And glad you noticed the extras and improvements since our last episode!

-Taco Buttfish.

[LL - St. Patty's]

Lock O' Lecilious

Best St. Patrick's Day Flash on Newgrounds, and I found the fishy! But something puzzles me. You're drinking, but you're only 20...

Aw, who cares, it's six more days 'till St. Patty's Day!

LeafLock responds:

well the drinking age in several countries is 18

[OLD MOBS EP2]

<Review Request Club>

Right from the beginning of Episode 2 I could see you were using the Dragon Ball Z theme with the old man, young kid with powers, and the monster with the rough, scratchy voice. The reason why it worked so perfectly is because you combined it with new art. Making a fun, familiar theme with intriguing new characters. Follow the rhythm of that.

What was the frame rate, 14? It seemed awfully slow. Although your art skills dazzling, your animator abilities don't look too sharp.

The voices were okay. Sound quality was poor, but I know you don't have complete control over it. I do so wish your equipment gets better.

The plot seems to be doing okay. You are ending the episodes well.

I believe that wraps it up. I hope to see exponential improvement in the next chapter. I promise I'll see it; I never stop watching a series mid-way.

~InnerChild548

tacobuttfish responds:

Glad you enjoyed it, and yes, we were definitely inspired by the great Akira Toriyama and his series. And we take this series very seriously, so you'll see the equipment and the end result of each product get better and better with time. So, see you for Episode 3 sometime this month (March)!

-Taco Buttfish.

[Don't Forget to Brush]

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Animation- 9
Plot- 6
Theme- 10 (By theme I mean moral)
Lip Sync- 9

Overall- 8.5

Comments- I didn't it funny at all. However, I don't grade humor, because it's unjust.

teh-mobile-sponge responds:

You don't it funny at all.....?